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November 02, 2017

SAMPLE ANSWER Đề IELTS Writing Task 1 - 28/10/2017

Task 1 (28/10/2017): The percentage of 3 types of crimes: car theft, house burglary & street robbery in England & Wales from 1970 to 2015

The provided line graph shines light on how three kinds of crimes (namely, automobile thefts, home burglaries and street robberies) were committed in England and Wales during the 1970-2000 period. Overall, the percentage of car theft increased most significantly and was always higher than that of the other two crime categories.

Firstly, despite some fluctuations, the rate of street robberies did not change considerably over the years. From roughly 0.1% in 1970, this figure almost hit 0.2% in 1975, 1985 and 1995, but it eventually declined to slightly less than 0.1% in 2000.

However, the incidence of car theft and home burglary was much higher and generally experienced an upward trend over the thirty-year period. At first, they accounted for just 0.4% and 0.3% respectively in 1970, but rose by 0.4% and 0.1% in the same order in 2000, leaving the proportion of street robberies falling far behind. Specifically, they reached their peak at 1.4% in 1985 (the former) and at 0.6% in 1990 (the latter) before dropping back down.

*Chart analysis

Đây là dạng đề 1 line graph (về tỷ lệ phạm tội ở Anh & xứ Wales từ 1970 đến 2000). Có 3 lines: 1 line for car theft; 1 line for home burglary; 1 line for street robbery

Nhìn chung: tỷ lệ car theft là cao nhất suốt giai đoạn này, đồng thời tăng đáng kể nhất.

Cụ thể:

  • Car theft: có dao động (đạt đỉnh là 1.4% năm 1985), nhưng xét cả giai đoạn là tăng từ 0.4% lên 0.8% (chênh lệch: 0.4%)
  • Home burglary: cũng dao động (đạt đỉnh là 0.6% năm 1990), nhưng xét cả giai đoạn là tăng từ 0.3% lên 0.4% (chênh lệch: 0.1%)
  • Street robbery: dao động không đáng kể, và xét cả giai đoạn là giảm từ 0.1% xuống chưa đầy 0.1%

*Some vocab items:

  • to commit crimes: to commit offences [phạm tội]
  • three types of crime: three kinds/categories of offence [3 loại tội (ác)]
  • car theft: automobile theft [nạn trộm xe hơi]
  • home burglary: home break-in [tội đào tường khoét vách]
  • street robbery: street mugging [tội trấn lột trên phố]
  • percentage: proportion / rate / incidence [tỷ lệ]
  • to account for roughly X%: to comprise approximately X% / to make up around X% [chiếm tỷ lệ khoảng X%]

*Some structures

  • X fluctuated: X had fluctuations / X went up and down [X dao động]
  • X experienced a(n) upward/downward trend: X had a(n) rising/falling trend [X có xu hướng tăng/giảm]
  • X increased from Y% in ... to Z% in ...: From Y% in ..., X went up to Z% in ... / Starting at Y% in ..., X rose to Z% in ...[X tăng từ Y% vào năm ... đến Z% vào năm ...]
  • X did not increase considerably: X increased inconsiderably / X did not rise significantly / X did not have a remarkable rise [X tăng không đáng kể]
  • X reached its peak at Y% in ...: X reached its peak figure at Y% in ... / X peaked at Y% in ... [X đạt đỉnh là Y% vào năm ...]
  • X increased by Y%: X had a Y% increase [X tăng Y%]

 

 

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